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The sun and moon

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The moon sparkles brightly at night,

where the sun provides us with our ultraviolet light.

Flames dance;

in a hypnotic trance.

As the sun burns hot,

while the moon is in it's hiding spot.


The moonlight dances and the dew seeps;

while all of humanity sleeps.

Under the calming moon,

the sun will quickly rise all too soon.

The moon will go hide,

while the sun will come to provide.
This is my first poem I tried to rhyme all the verses so the flow may be a bit rough but I would love feedback. This is a weekly prompt from the :iconthewritersmeow: the theme is: This and That. So I choose the opposites the sun and moon La la la la 
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Icepaw-Steelfang's avatar
Love it, you did an amazing job on this piece!